Day 44: writing feedback

Today I gave the first draft of all my work so far to one of my supervisors - a bit daunting as no other person has laid eyes on my dissertation before today! 

 But after feeling a bit nervous to hand it over - I received some really good feedback! Of course, there was a bunch of tweaks and changes, but my supervisor said he thought my writing was promising and very eloquent - he said it was a great first draft. Can head into the weekend, needing and having earned a little break, but also with some confidence that I'm on the right lines... 
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